hahaha...what a funny why to make them die

Please update "This Kiss"

dm: wow...i like your style of writing a lot, and your subject matter was a good choice. although i dont read angst fics a lot, i really enjoyed this one, in the way that anyone can enjoy an angst fic. ciao!

I guess Takato is more accepting than most people. He already accepts the inevitable with grace.

Umm... Okay.
That was perhaps the most depressing thing I've ever seen written.
I'm kinda hoping that this is just a phase, and that we'll see more of This Kiss soon.
Wow.

You are a very talented writer. This story is very good, as well as Iris. This is kind of a review for both, since I read Iris just before this. Great stories, both of them. I hope you continue this, I want to see what happens. If you don't, this is a good place to stop anyway. Keep up the good work!

Depressing, but written quite well. Glad to see you're still alive and writing.