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Addictedreader09 2008-11-06 . chapter 11
omg loved this story it was cute and angsty!
Memphis Atari 2008-02-05 . chapter 11
love it.. you painted Draco so perfectly, in his cold dastardly way and i worried a bit that the end wouldn't justify.. that you would make him a total pansy.. but better yet.. you made him perfect and he's not going bonkers over being a 'mother' hows that for a poof :P wish we coulda seen Cissy's reaction :D
Zoomi 2007-07-14 . chapter 11
You said the pairing would be D/H but it seemed like Harry was dominant throughout the whole fic though its due to Draco and his memory loss making him sound all lovesick and more honest than he ever was before. But none the less I loved it though the whole mage thing only purpose seemed to be getting Draco up the duff. :]
caz-felton-malfoy 2007-07-12 . chapter 11
sequel! plz i love this x
klepto rabbit 2007-03-10 . chapter 11
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That was undoubtably one of the top ten H/D fics I've ever read.
VERY nice longer version of chapter ten.
Never did like Ron overly much anyway.
Good epilouge and my friends and I always thought Snape acted lke a bit of a **, I just love that it was literal here! XD
Snowfalcon 2007-01-27 . chapter 11
Awesome story. Suprise ending too. I'm undecided if the mpreg stuff was really needed at the end, I think the story would have done just fine w/out the epilogue, but hey, I'm not the author. I always love stories where one of the characters senses or memories are tampered with, they're always very interesting. Great job.
~Akire
blkmagicklily 2006-11-14 . chapter 11
All I can say is that you are brilliant and this has been one of the most multi-chapter entertaining slash harry/draco stories I have ever read. The baby issue was a bit over the edge but cute and is making me want a sequel. I want to know Blaise reaction to the letter, I want to know what's going to happen during the weekend with Severus and Narcissa. Will Draco be a total whinny girl while he is pregnant? What about Harry's issues with Dumbledore? Please tell you will do a sequel...
shifter1542 2006-09-24 . chapter 11
that was..hot. I am so glad that I got to read the other ch 10...just made it better. You are awsome at this, keep it up
minx 2006-09-12 . chapter 11
i have to say that it was "original" , but strange , too fast in some parts
and it was confusing what draco really feels and the end was strange , draco love harry ? i don t know what are you traying to achieve

firts that draco say that...
well i don t know how to explain it , it was confusing all the fealings and how draco act
well i don t have time , all i want to said that i don t like it , it don t have a really plot , confusing and a wate of time in others words a **
have a good day
d a r k a n g e l XD 2006-08-15 . chapter 10
hey..it was good but i think u should put the scenes email on you profile. easier for us to view!! kk :) it's a good story :)
Fire Pixy 2006-08-06 . chapter 11
This story was awesome~! I love how you snuck in the little "surprises" at the end. The baby, and NevillexDean. Persopnally, I never thought of that one before. 10 points for creativity!
Govnuk 2006-08-03 . chapter 11
Perhaps it's just when using swedish computers, but your link in chapter ten went to kth:s homepage (w(.)kth(.)com) when I tried to click it. seem to work thoght, so you might want to change it.

Liked the story, by the way.
kaiba-queen 2006-08-02 . chapter 11
Fabulous!
chaeli.mee. 2006-08-01 . chapter 11
AW! That is all so adorable! I love it! Are you planning on posting a sequel?? I love this fict so much. It almost doesn't seem like its the end! Please please please post a sequel!
ME!

p.s. I love the "draco and the fetus." Hilarious! :D
fanjessfiction 2006-08-01 . chapter 11
brilliant! is there gonna b a sequel?
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