Argh! Why haven't you finished this? Sometimes, it's a little rushed but I think it's good.

This was a great story. How come you stopped updating?

Loved the fact that Squall shouted at Caraway - just a shame that he didn't beat him up a bit too though.

This just isn't their day. First Rinoa, then when they get her back, Squall is taken. Very good chapter as always.

Poor Rinoa. She doesn't seem to be having any luck with the men in her life.

This is not looking good for Rinoa is it?

Ha Ha! Very good. Loved the bit were she said that she wanted to sleep with him. Funny.

Hmm, I can't wait to find out just what Seifer did to Squall. Good chapter.

I like it already. There's an irresistable quality about your fics that I have read so far that makes me want to read more.

I'm sorry, Seifer's eyes are GREEN. Not blue. But, its a great story! Keep it up! I like it!

UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! :'(

nice storyline!

. .. ... ...wow UPDATE

UPDATE OR DIE

awesome chapter! keep going, still reading! yeah squinoa action next Chapter!
Thanks!