There's a somber magic about this piece that is very appealing - well done.

Aww how sad for Severus. My goodness the Marauders are evil in this story! I don't usually like them but now I loathe them. You sure do like Edgar Allen Poe don't you? Your other story mentioned his poem. I like him too. He's so dark and fascinating. A bit like the Potions Master! Good job.

This is really sad but I like it.

First of all let me establish that I am not a canonista - so I approach every story with an open mind. Second -- I think this is fabulous. Since every character in HP canon universe is written one dimensionally except for Harry; any other side to them that is explored is no less valid or correct. I love what you have done here exploring another side of my beloved Severus lol; keep up the great work. Added to favs and recommended.

The whole issue seemed oddly familiar, and James and Sirius were OOC, but this was ok. Not as good as your other one, but ok.

I Loved It! Very Nice. You Captured Snape Perfectly. Why Does Everything Have To Go Wrong For Him? :) Keep Up The Good Work!

I love Poe too! Awesome!!