damn, thats deep.

so much angst in such a short fic! this is a really good ficlet...

... i hate the james/sirius pairing and i still loved this. it made me so sad. that's the mark of a good fanfiction.

That is so harsh. This is what I think of when we discussed how you write for real as opposed to some of the work you have produced for class. This piece aches. It makes me feel mildly sick reading it.

Aw, sad