I loved this fic! thanx:-)

this is a really great story, keep up the good work : )

oh my god, I loved this fic! you definitely should write more, and I even urge you to write a sequel to this because Literatis are the bestest ever! Please please pleasy please! With whipped cream and hot fudge and even little rainbow sprinkle jimmie thingeys!
You are so good at this kind of stuff and I really enjoyed this story. KEEP WRITING!
~Molly~

I love love love love love this story! With cherries on top; heehee!
Here I go, off to read Chapter 5 and more!...and your story does not suck at all!
~Molly~

There is no way that you could get to New Haven from NYC in 30 minutes.

And,there are no Wal-Marts in NYC.

Wow what a great sequel. I loved the ending, we finally got some much needed litness in a realistic manner, not in a fluffy overdone manner but in a way that could actually have happened if the writers of the show were smarter. I loved how you made the timing work so well and that Jess actually went after Rory for once. I hope that you'll write many more fics in the future b/c you are great at it. Loved it chica!

You SHOULD WRITE MORE FICS! I loved this story. It was so god! I loved it from the beginning... I was screaming no about the date thing with that sammy girl, but I knew you would end Rory and Jess abck together in some point. THANKS from this excellent fic, it was pleasure to read it!

Hey!

This was a very sweet ending to this story and probably the best chapter you have written so far. It wasn't in character all the time, especially Jess, but it was still a good story. And, yeah, I think you should write another fic, just watch out for those cliches.

Bye, smile :-)

That was such a great ending. I loved this story. I loved how ROry and Jess got together in the end and were able to work it out. You should definitely write more fanfictions. The world needs more Literati fics!

i think you should continue on with another sequel to this story. its really good it seems like u could continue on if u wanna. u should definityl write more fics. longer lol. but great story and chapter...too me.

Nice. Very nice. Can't say anything else but excellent, marvelous, fantastic, and the list goes on and on...^-^

Blessed Be

First of all, I've got to tell you that I really like this story. The chapter was great and I really like the impulsive Rory. Good work!

i really think u should have jess explain to sammy that that was his x girlfriend who he loves and he's sorry but can't do this only be friends then he goes to run to rory and he get out side sees her on the bench and calls her name she looks up with tears ojn her face and starts to walk away jess goes too her says wait rory that was only a friend she say well it dosen't matter anyways he say it dose matter rory i haven't stopped... stopped what jess loving u i try to pretend that i don't but it always comes back. she kisses him and lets go only to say she loves him and kisses him again. jess says so dose this mean...rory says i sure hope so. and she smiles and he kisses her again. change whatever you want and if u need ne more help email me.

Excellent! Update soon! Please! Don't leave us hanging!

Hey!

This was a pretty good chapter, there could have been some more detail here and there to make it seem less rushed and dramatic, but other than that it was an okay chapter and I can't wait for another one.

Bye, smile :-)