 wellduh... 2005-06-01 . chapter 1 Heh! That does sound like Seifer. |
 Forbidden Smiles 2005-01-24 . chapter 1Interesting is what all I have to say...^_^ Nice job. |
 Squeemu 2004-10-28 . chapter 1Man, this is an awesome story. It's not very long but the character interactions tell you so much. The description of Seifer's poker face was great too.
The amount all the kids added in the flashback was really good too, and Selphie adding eight because it's a cooler number than seven is /so/ her. And man, the ending was totally great and in character.
Story was well crafted and the switch from the flashbacks to the present worked well and Ellone teaching everyone how to play poker is just a cool idea. |
 Aaron D 2004-09-08 . chapter 1This was really good. Short, but I guess it was supposed to be. I didn't notice any poker-rule "faux pas"'s, but I guess I wasn't paying too close attention to it, anyway. It's nice to see Ellone have a primary position in a story, 'cause we don't see that too often. |
 CuteMooglez 2004-04-27 . chapter 1Aw, I liked it. As a card shark myself, I have to say that you did a very good job describing everything. The flashbacks of the orphanage were very cute too. But the entire of Seifer and Ellone playing poker was just completely priceless. Now you have me thinking ((inside my mind: Hmm...Seifer/Ellone romance)) Uh oh. o.O ^o^ Anyway, great job! Very cute! |