|Reviews for A Shot in The Dark|
| mae-E 1/22/12 . chapter 1
this was a cute story. you did a good job.
and for english not being your first languge you did really well. better than most speak/write it natively. :) not perfect but really good.
I was a fan of the show too. it was a shame that it only lasted 8 eipsodes. I thought that they did a good job in casting cause there was such an unbelieveably intense chemistry between the main actor and actress! it was part of what made it so good to watch.
you did a really great job capturing the essance of the characters! it read almost like a script or the show. :)
| Azabeth 5/30/04 . chapter 1
Great start, this has potential, i look forward to reading more soon x
| jadedghostgurl 5/5/04 . chapter 1
this is good.
I think you really got the whole relationship between Tarzan and Jane down. I lke the way you made he descriptions very details and senusal almost.
You shouls keep writing it'd be interestingto see the Jane and Tarzan relationship develop if thats what your going for but make sure to wacth for making John too Tamed.
Don't get me wrong this is very good.