 Vilyanna 2005-09-18 . chapter 13 I loved your story and I just had to tell you. I really like the approach you took to Lavan and Kalira and would love to read some more. |
 Alastia Starsong 2005-02-04 . chapter 14When will she find out? MOREMORE! |
 Stormfeather 2004-12-07 . chapter 14OMG. That's everything and nothing about what I can say. Beautiful story. Sequel? Yes? Yesyesyesyes? Pretty please...? Haha, great writing. I'll be looking for the sequel... :) |
 MyDearestObsession 2004-10-14 . chapter 1I LOVE YOU! not like that *cough cough* Brightly Burning is my favorite book ever! couldn't put it down, didn't want to give the book back to the library *till i got my own*, luv it luv it luv it! *if you cant tell, i'm hyper right about now...* good plot, great grammar *more than i can say for some of those i edit*, it's awesome. i haven't written any mercedes lackey fanfics, but i do have one rayearth and one inuyasha *that is coming DOWN for reediting* and i plan on a series of misty fanfics. email me at risingphoenix1357@ sometime, i'll tell you more!
ja, mata ne,
Eclypse ~*~ |
 Celebwen Telcontar 2004-09-28 . chapter 14Oh, poor Kel! Well, what will happen now? But I do like the story, alot!! Keep writing!! Will Talia show up anytime soon? |
 wolfite 2004-06-09 . chapter 14Awesome story! I'm glad I read it! |
 xout 2004-06-03 . chapter 14awesome story, hope you keep on writing. |
 Lurks in Shadows 2004-06-03 . chapter 14Much, much goodness. I'm sad its over. :'( Sequal! SEQUAL! SEQUAL I TELL YA! |
 PrettyKittyOreo 2004-05-26 . chapter 14It's over ALREADY!?!?!? But I just read Chapter 12 today... Anyway, I love your story and I think that you are a great writer and a great person! Thank you so much for taking the time to write this story, and to respond to my reviews (there's one author who drives me crazy responding to everyone EXCEPT me)! It's been really fun reading your story and I hope you start another one soon! :):):):):):):) This is probably the longest review I've ever written in my life, just so ya know. Sometimes I don't even write a whole word, just a smiley. Anyway, I hope I'll be reviewing your next story soon! ;) |
 Breezefire 2004-05-26 . chapter 14It's over ::tear tear::! I loved the story, as usual, but I thought it ended a little abruptly for all the 13 chapters put into building up how they were split, and Kel wouldn't know she was Kalira, etc. And did Kel figure out that she was Kalira? Maybe i'm just dense (probably, lol), but I think you said she did... but then a Herald before the Storms series would know that the Companions were humans returning. Ok, anyways, loved your story, looking forward to the next one, and I'm so sad its over!
~wind to thy wings, breezefire~ |
 Tenshichild 2004-05-26 . chapter 14Oh, oh *teary eyed* The ending was just lovely, I enjoyed it very much. This is one of the most interesting Lackey fics I've read. And you're very welcome for all of the reviews, it was totally my pleasure. |
 Dreamspinner K'Chona 2004-05-26 . chapter 13Aw! They're together.
*cries at the end*
Sequel, please! |
 Dreamspinner K'Chona 2004-05-26 . chapter 12Good as usual. Hope Kel comes to her senses. |
 wizard116 2004-05-26 . chapter 13*sobs* this is such a great story i'm sad to see it end. but it was a good ending to a great story. |
 PrettyKittyOreo 2004-05-26 . chapter 12I can't believe it's almost over ALREADY! Oh well, guess I'll have to read the next one you write :) Poor Lan has to wait another chapter... But if he didn't, there would be less for us poor little readers... Hope the next one's up soon! :) |