wow, beautifully written...:) i really loved this!

Hey. That was an awesome poem . I loved the book, and I thought you did a good jod describing the cruelty of what was going on. Awesome job!

I liked it. It's a good poem. I'm sure you did pretty good for your project but you could have touched on some deeper issues or extended those issues but have more meaning behind your words. Almost like your poetry has to be decoded. That's how mostof the best poets write. Give it a shot, if you're interested, and it'll do your writing wonders.

Thanx for your time!!

i thought ur poem was quite good, a bit 2 'dramatic' though, if u know what i mean. i can imagine it being read by a woman with the back of her hand over her forehead. the words are good though, but it doesn't explain the trial 2 well (im reading the book at the mo 4 english) overall i rate ur poem at 6/10

That's a really good retelling of the trial scene. I like your style; it's very interesting. I'm sure you got a good grade on the project!

That's a really good poem. The way you wrote was what I think was so good about it.Your word choice was really good.

that was good. Interesting rhyme scheme. it followed what happened in the book and thta is always a good thing. I thought that the poem was nice. I would like to see more!
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