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DerektheRogue
2004-04-06
ch 26,
abuseDear sir could you PLEASE tel me where to find the other Labor stories of GREY?
DerektheRogue@yahoo.com
Kura-kun
2003-04-24
ch 26,
abuse*throws in a review to make 100*

Well i browsed your file and saw this little...epic...It was good but i still think there was an utter lack of guilt! :)

Guilt on Ami Guilt on Ami! *chants*

Anyways later...
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 26,
abuseThe epilogue was perfect, alt 1 ok but unsatisfying, 2 was OK, 3 was solid, 4 was very good, and 5 was OK.
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 25,
abuseThe ending didn't really feel like an ending. It did feel like an outer ring of hell tho'
Loved the omake.
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 24,
abuseNow that was a great omake!
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 20,
abuse"And would someone turn off that darn buglight? Haruka-san keeps getting fried
in that thing." Hehehehehehe
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 17,
abuseanti-bimbo wards? *snort*
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 13,
abuseI'd love to see the Arie's as Ranma's father omake made into a full fic.
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 9,
abuseToo many parts I loved to list.
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 8,
abuseYou gotta love Jared's response!
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 6,
abuseHeheheheh. Jared ran away.
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 4,
abuseMamoru braining a pigeon with a piece of pretzel as a quest. *chuckle*

A Tarrasque as a minor problem?
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 3,
abuseI think you did a good job on Grey. He isn't a powerhouse so of course he will behave diferently.
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-23
ch 1,
abuseI wonder how many people took jobs at a bookstore just for the discount?
Lusty Babe
2002-06-10
ch 26, anon.
abuseSomething Occured to me.... Seeings Grey is a priest of Jared/Heph/Bast does that mean there can be more adventures of Grey? Jared seems to be the Type to make him an avatar..... ;)
just a thought.... bi bi
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