Spelling please. And the girl really has to stop cooing over Mort and angsting over Thomas and that damn secretary. Place yourself in both characters' souls and respond while attempting not to get too OOC or drool on the floor.

I think you should space out the paragraphs and give Lilly a more understandable reason for a her current infatuation with Mort. But I think that the corn line was gorgeous. Keep on writing and watch the OC. Don't make her too perfect.

You must update I love it

That was awesome! Can't wait for more!

hey! this is cool! though I hope Shooter won't come back... :-(
Lily and Mort seem so cute together! ;-) I hope you update soon!
ta-ta,
-blossomlite

i completely forgot what this story was about, but it's always nice to read about johnny's beauty :)

Hi! I just started reading this story, and it caught me! You left me chained to my chair while I was reading it. Please, update soon! I want to know what happens with Mort, Lilly and that stupid Thomas... Please!

The lady of the Shadows

P.S. You may like my Secret Window story, please, check it!

lovely, he is GORGEOUS ;] i can'y wait for the next chapter..

Well, look who's back. About time!
By the way, I like :)

Hey looky here I'm finally reviewing - a little belated but its here. Well, as you probably already know - I LOVE IT! As much as I love Johnny Depp, no wait, as much as I love Aragorn! And that's saying something. It's brilliant like your spiffy little self and I need more so write more. Now I know I won't be around to pester you - hell no one is going to be around at school anymore seeing as we only have 2 days left (EK) but you better keep writing. Remeber - I know where you live! Keep it up... yay yay yay - sxc JD! Best of Luck to you my awesome author - an don't ever forget the fanfictions. Love ya...
L.A*

I really am enjoying this story i think that it is really romantic and cute and if i was Lilly I wouldnt care about what the town people though as long as i had mort it would be ok.

how LOVELY! i say you up the rating to pg-13 and give us a bit more in the detail department, lol. great story! i put you on my author alert!

You could always change it to R. :D
*hint hint*

WOW, its amazing!! I love it!!..

Oh and here are teh Finding Neverland theater times thingys...

FINDING NEVERLAND

Anticipated Release Dates:
Southampton Cinema, New York (USA): Aug. 29, 2004
Venice Film Festival (Italy): Sept., 2004
Peter Pan Centennial Celebration, Shreveport, LA (USA): Sept. 11, 2004
Santa Barbara International Film Festival (USA): Oct. 1, 2004
Chicago International Film Festival (USA): Oct. 7-21, 2004
USA: Oct. 22, 2004
UK: Oct. 29, 2004
Denmark: Nov. 12, 2004
Netherlands: Dec. 9, 2004
Finland: Dec. 10, 2004
Belgium: Dec. 29, 2004
France: Jan. 5, 2005
Argentina: Jan. 20, 2005
Belgium: Sept. 1, 2004
Brazil: Feb. 4, 2005

I happened to be looking at Johnny stuff while i was reading your story...i can multitask!!

Ok any way, hope you update sooner rather than later!!

c'mon, that wasn't PG... i mean, you didn't describe what they did at the end, right? ;) oh well.

geez, i wouldn't be able to concentrate on the music with mort's hand on my knee, i gotta tell ya!