   PrinceChidumebi 2008-08-25 . chapter 1please dont let this be the end of the fanfic this story must continue, i like all ur fics |
| Jezz 2008-04-16 . chapter 1 omg that is so cute =]
ive always want something like this to happen
you should write another one
please do!! |
 Morning Strider 2008-02-01 . chapter 1That was pretty good. go on with it! |
| naruhinaxfan 2007-10-29 . chapter 1 anna and the king? wasnt that in "The King and I"? if it was i love that show! xD oh and btw nice fic! |
| Titus Wells 2007-10-12 . chapter 1 This is awsome man, just awsome. Plz for the love god keep writing these! |
| gearwolf000 2007-10-09 . chapter 1 this is one of the best naruina fanfiction i have read. |
 contestshipper 2007-09-16 . chapter 1ha ha awsome |
| zeren 2007-08-10 . chapter 1 THIS WAS GREAT KEEP IT UP |
| hinata's lover 2007-06-09 . chapter 1 you should continue it, it sounds interesting. but between you and me naruto should have "scored", catch my drift, lol |
| tiger982305 2007-01-28 . chapter 1 I htink that this was a good start, you should continue this story, i could be a really good one. |
| THE UNKNOWN 2007-01-11 . chapter 1 N CASE U 4-GOT OR NO 1 TOLD U, THE NAME OF THE KAGE OF MIST VILLAGE IS MIZUKAGE (JUST THOUGHT U SHOULD NO) |
| HaganeKyoukan 2006-12-21 . chapter 1 Could be much better. Not telling you how to write but you should develop the characters more and create small events that would lead up to the bed thing and if you delve into their acutal relating to each other with these new emotions. Just a thought |
| THE UNKNOWN 2006-12-14 . chapter 1 ANY FANFIC W/ NARUTO AS HOKAGE IS COOL. GOOD ON YA |
| Makaila 2006-09-30 . chapter 1 That was so sweet^^ You should continue |
| LordHatredX 2006-08-05 . chapter 1 good story |
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