Haha, geez. You sure know how to depress a person. But I mean that in a good way. You would mae an amazing arthur one day.

Oh dear, what a dark place Sands finds himself in. Your poetry really rings with misery and bitter reflection. They conjure up that dark place in your mind which focuses on all the horrible things in the world and all the injustices. I don't mean that in a bad way because the poems are meant to be dark. They strike me as a really good description of deep depression. Anyway, real good stuff.

Bloody brilliant.This one seemed to have a more personal feel,I liked it.

Nice.It's so sad to see someone like Sands so close to giving up like that :(

But again,beautiful piece.Oh,and Linkin Park rocks!

Ohh,I think this is without doubt my favorite.

I swear I'm running out of good things to say about you.You're simply brilliant!

You are such a talented writer.You have an amazing gift with words.

Wow again.That was something,I had tears in my eyes.

Wow.You gave a perfect description of what Sands would be like when he's on his own.

powerful. the lines seem like a run-on sentence when read together and definitely creates a lost and on-going feeling for the character. nice climax too.

This will always be one of my favorite poem-fictions because when i read it- i can picture Sands in my head. Poor lost Sands, nobody cares about him. Oh well, he's evil. Many thanks.

*cries* Poor Sands! Now i've probably read oh...1,249 poems about pain and death and such...but nothing like this. Yup. This is the cream of the crop. You are an amazing writer, to say the very least.

Oh,very good.One of the best once upon a time in mexico one shots I've ever read.Incredible work.