aw, it was so sweet, it made me cry... in a good way though ^_^ you captured their personalities so well in this and the fic really flows beautifully. I love it.

Wa, that is so sweet. Love Shishido in the fic, especially when he touched Ohtori's hair.

aww so sweet

My review didn't go through either. weird.
Just to say that I really enjoyed this! I like the subtlety of their relationship, it's warm and sweet. ^_^

Re-reviewed, cos it didn't seem to get thru last time... ^^; Just to let you know that it's one elegant writing. The atmosphere was built up very nicely from your descriptions and character thoughts.

ooh it's so cute! ^__^ What a lovely story.