good fic

wow, nice Nami/Muffy clash. All the stories I've read have something like that...but thats ok, rly

wow, already? finished...i've only a few minutes, and then i added it, I'm Naruko San, but, since I had to change my nam, cuz Icou7ldnt rememebr my pass, i made this name! whoot...

AWSOME! dude, i so like these chapters better then the others! its long, has more space, I LIKE IT!

hmm...getting better, BUT, you rly need longer chpaters!! If u dont, i'll be reviewing evry inute! (and trust me, you dont want that!) Oh and in case you need to talk to me for any reason, just IM me at Izichan, AIM, not YIM

hm...yiu still need more spaces >

wow...this needs work...but, in a good way! you nedd more spaces, truthfully, but otherwise, its a pretty good story soi far!

“Just look at this…I ask you to marry me and you break down!” Hatori said with a laugh but I felt him hug me back. “Hey Nami, I promise to cook amazing things for you from now on.”

sorry, but that is dorky. Make them kiss for peace sake!

wow this a truely good story if only mine where as good i couldn't stop reading it if only mine where this good

I shall wait for your new story! (wonderful ending!)

I love it. I have nothing more to say... :)

~ suki9870 ~

wow. awesome! ^^ thats all I can say that its awesome! ^^
-Miya

:)

Wow, I really enjoyed it...I can't write...so...please don't mind my pityfull review...

Um..right! Back to what I was saying...I loved every bit of it! The Last chappy was a wait...but worth it! Well worth it!

Cool story! I love it! I have been debating on who to coose for my bride in the game...and i think i will take Nami now...lol You're lucky you finally finished your story...i still haven't finished mine...*sniff*...oh well...just a little hyper right now.

This story was amazing. It was awesome. Your a great author. I hope to see more work from you! Good Luck In College! Update soon! Peace!