I really liked this story, you really considered what a reploid might be thinking about during the most probable death hour. You took it in and adapted it to fit the Zero you have in your story. OOC or not, you did an amazing job with portraying Zero's thoughts. I liked his muses on if reploid's have a soul the best, and his thoughts looking down upon our blue planet.

It doesn't matter if your story doesn't fit with the actual story at all, that's why it's called fanfiction.

There was only one thing that bugged me; why would Zero think he's a demon? Not important! Your story not mine.

Keep writing!

Holy...crap...O_OI'm not one to like yaoi stuff, but...but... just... wow! I love this story... 'Tis great, very, VERY great!=D

Wow! That was so sad, but so well written! I'd love to see more of your work up here sometime!

I thought this story was absolutely before. Very good job! It was very pretty! Write something else...even if it's just for me! *is greedy* I thought this was beautiful, once again.