nice. I really liked this one, even if the formatting was being...difficult. I stopped watching Smallville after the first season, but I definitely wished this episode was in it.

this is really good so far...keep up the good work!

I loved it! I'm a big Chluce fan and this is AWESOME!

If only the WB would do this one... I liked the script format. I thought it was easy to read...don't know what the other reviewers were talking about. It was very Bruce. )

Rewrite this using some good grammer. I was actually interested when I read the summary, but then I saw how horrible it actually was typed, I didn't even bother to read it. If you're going to use scripting use it right. Ex:
Lana: Hi.
Bruce: Blah blah.
I'm actually interested in this story, so please rewrite well so others can enjoy it.
p.s. I'd recommend never writing a story in script format, I've yet to read a good one.

wow, this is good :) I hope you write more
but I have quite a hard time reading their conversations. Maybe next time you could put PERSON:"blah blah" so show their talkings? :)

Wow. I really liked this- especially the ending, which was sad, but had a really poignant moment w/ Bruce and Chloe. :) Anyway, this was a great fic. I hope you do a sequel, or at least write other stories. :)

Great story. It should be made into a Smallville episode!

Writing in script style really made this a different kind of fic. The interaction between the characters was spot on, once again you prove why you're one of the best writers on the site.

Yeah! So Bruce is going w/ Chloe to the Sadie Hawkins... assuming they make it there. :) Can't wait to have Clark and Bruce talk- and maybe reveal their secrets. ;) Please update soon!

Awesome. The formatting is distracting, but great story. Can't wait for you to expand on Bruce's intentions.

I love this story so far. The way it's written is fantastic and the story is great. I can't wait to read more!

I like how you've paired Chloe and Bruce- or it seems that way. :) Their interaction is good, I'm hoping she'll end up going to the dance w/ him. And I like how Lex is suspicious of Bruce and made Clark also have his doubts. Hope you can update soon!

Well written, but Fanfic's display engine appears to be mucking with your script-style formatting and making it very difficult to read. You might want to switch to left-justified formatting to make this work better with the site.

Not a fan of script style when I am looking for stories to read, but am a fan of your work and am enjoying this look into Lex and Bruce.