IS SUCK!

I dun liek and you shud red my story. read and view it ples. its best.

Entry#1
Kagome gave me this stupid pad thing...i don't know why i need it though, it's just a bunch of thin stuff and a long wooden thing that looks perfect for chewing...She called it a pencil or whatever. She thinks i've got issues nad it's best to just write out all my anger. All i could say is,"What the **?!"...anyway, i'm not a good writer person...demon, so i'm done. Oh, and she says that i should write about stuff that goes on during the day from my perspective. I think, that's what i got an inner voice for stupid **!...Ah Hell... Miroku's gone off somewhere again. Probably chasin' more girls or somethin'... Probably is going to get Sango angry again. Yeah, seeya and whatever...(i feel like i'm talkin' to this piece of **...)
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well, that's all that needs 2 be corrected,
the rest is fine..
i just added some more lines 2 the entry,,(about sango getting angry and other,,)

omg awsome! i lov it!

that was a good one but i dont know what shippo was going to say i hope you tell us in your next one

Aw you shouldn't discontinue this... it made me laugh. Just how Inuyasha wrote in his journal.. lmao xD anyway.. hope you'll change your mind

Discontinued. WHY?

sounds good, but r u ever gonna update?

hey, great story...could u send me the rest of it? i cant wait nemore, i wanna know wut happens.

can you send me the whole story please my e-mail

Would you please email me the whole story? My email is thx bunches!! good story btw!!

Good Story I Like the idea that Inu Has to write in a journal.

hello ^_^, i would like the story.. you seem to know what yer doing..*giggles* i'd love to hear the story here ..

Inu/shippo fanfics RULE! Please write more!

i like it, hey can you send me the other one, so i can read them both? You should keep doing this one too, it's pretty good, my email if you want both of them is loves_winged_dark_angel@ and my other one is muraku_crescent@

That was pretty good and I iked it very musch but you need to update no that its been almost a whole year since you haven't.Good luck to ya!! :)