"Impressive, most impressive."

Your story is very interesting. It has a very cool and different twist to the Cosby Show

I think its great so far. and very well written.

I like these two lines in particular for being well-written:

Blackout evenings lost their qualifier, became just evenings, deaf to mechanical demands, unimpressed by gadgets, stupid to the value of a buck.

Olivia watched people, or imagined she did.