That was...interesting. Good idea...but maybe you should have mayde things a little clearer. It was a bit confusing. Good though.
Macaday me a nut (and your one too!)

that was awesome. sad... but awesome.

A very different style of writing. I really like it though. I like how u got everything important that happened during their life in the story. Luv it ;) Keep it up!

WAH TO SAD! BOHOH!

It does not suck Hydra m'dear. To the contrary, I quite liked it. It was a moving story...I felt really sad in the end of it. *sniffs*
~Starlight

It doesn't suck. You've mispelled some words, such as "Gryffindor" and "werewolf", which is a bit annoying. I think the main thing about this fic is that all the paragraphs seem to be the same length. I know that's not true, but at first glance it seems that way. It makes it a bit of the difficult side to read. The way the human eyes glances at a screen (or page, as the case may be) favours a variety of paragraph lengths. It's attracted by that. Uniformity repels it. I know this isn't anything really to do with the story as it is, but it's a suggestion nonetheless. Just something to consider.

good story it made me cry and mad me feel so different emotions. it really is a brillent story.

That was... how to put this...WOW! I loved it!
~Potter4prez