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Silver Lady7
2009-07-22 . chapter 11
I always liked this story. It´s a pity you couldn´t actually give it an epilogue. I always wondered how would Bulma behave towards Vegeta after he´d wish her back... will she understand that the Saiyan who killed her was another, or would Vegeta have to re-gain her trust back, little by little?
Kiarene
2009-01-31 . chapter 11
I really enjoyed this story. Interesting storyline and wonderfully written!
vincent silverbud
2008-06-26 . chapter 11
best story i have read so far from you, great work, thumbs up!
Melissa
2007-09-07 . chapter 11
Cool story!
Wudelfin
2007-05-17 . chapter 11
now that was just a fun ride!
Hieiko
2006-11-30 . chapter 11
Glorious. Awesome fic!
Afrodite
2006-02-12 . chapter 1
What an interesting opening! I can tell this is going to be a very compelling and action-packed story.
falconsblade
2005-06-27 . chapter 11
wow, i couldn't stop reading. Hm, wish Vegeta would be able to stay. Could bring his family over. Rule Vegeta-sei. That could be cool. Find a way to easily transport between dimetions. I have a feeling Mirari Vegeta isnt going to give up so easy. That scientist guy bugs me too.

Update soon!
Vegge's Mate
2005-05-03 . chapter 11
I really enjoyed your story. It was certainly orignal and nicely written. I would love to see you update it soon. My email: vegges_mate@
Silver Lady
2005-05-01 . chapter 11
Hi,
just wanted to say how much I loved your story. Actually, I already saw other of Vegeta facing his evil what-he-could-have-been, but never so well written. I loved specially when he learns Bulma was killed and the way he carried his pain. So touching that scene when he lays at her side on bed "ironic that he felt at home in a simple earth people room than in a royal king room". Perfect.

Many people doesn't know how to present Vegeta's reaction towards Bulma's death, show him as a cry-baby, suicide, or whatever. Here he cries, but keeps his dignity.(and I'm also grateful that you didn't show Mirai Vegeta killing her. I hate these sort of cruelty scenes)
I just can't wait for the rest.
United we fall
2005-03-29 . chapter 10
this is pretty good :)
jack
2005-02-17 . chapter 11
could someone please explain better about the switch in chapter 11? by the way... great story
A Dreamers Death- Dead Account
2005-01-12 . chapter 11
wow this story is ace can't wait till it's updated...plz update it soon :-)
Visitor
2005-01-02 . chapter 6
Getting even better :)
Visitor
2005-01-01 . chapter 2
Still looks good :)
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