i wonder wat will happen next
LOKIXMAYURA 4EVER!

You have to update this story.
This story has made me laugh till I cried and let me tell you that rarely happens. I couldnt even focus on studying for my midterms. if I fail I wont care but you have to update. this is hilarious. you have kept the true nature of the characters threw out the entire story. meanwhile you have had made a story of your owns. I praise you for it. and let i really do because you are the first author that has made me write an review for somebody in a year. your awesome. I hope you cont.

your devoted fan
rainingblood6

fenrir in a dress! Kawaii, and his reaction is so in character, i could have died laughing! even though its been years i hope you update!

kaidou

There was a slight mistake in the mythology that you just said. Glut who is supposedly Loki's first wife, really actually wasn't. There is another being known as Logi, who is often mistaken with Loki, that was actually the father of Eisa and Eimyrja and married to Glut. A common mistake in secondary sources and also because of the similarities in their names.

Loki was also never married to Angrboda, they just had three kids together. His first and only wife was Sign, who he met after Angrboda.

Anyway, I just thought you should know the real facts. I'm a research nut to be honest so that's why i know this. Anyway, great story so far, I'm going to keep reading now.

kaidou

Ahh... I only just now found this story... It's a shame you didn't at least post your epilogue since it was already written! This was quite an enjoyable story.

*can't stop chuckling* oh this is great!!

aw! poor fenrir! he's one of my all time faves, but even so i can't help but to laugh at the image of him in a lacy dress...

what episode did Heimdall kiss Mayura in? i never got to see the whole thing...anywho. great stroy and an interesting way for her to find out the truth. i don't think i've read one like this before.

Dear writer,
I Love THIS! it so funny that make me want to hug Mayura and give her a pat on the back. the way she describe the Gods (which is most all are true.)was funny money. I'm a LokixMayrua fan and would love to see what you got in this tea party.

P.S sorry but i dont have a e-mail. need to create one.

I love this story, pity it hasn't been updated in over 2 years.

Yay! someone who actally makes a funny story (with heimdall) brillant. I cant think of anything to suggest...

Aw... you should have finished. I felt it was a very good story. Poor Freyr. He got complimented only for a paragraph and then she forgot about him. But still... PLEASE FINISH!

I really like your story, i think it's funny and that all the characters are just right. Their not OOC or anything. I especially like how you portray Freyr. His personality is just like in the manga/anime. I support you all the way and hope you get the next chapter done soon. I'm also a big fan of LokixMayura. I love the blushing/intimate scenes between Loki and Mayura. I also like the way the characters react. Sorry for writing so much.

wow!! Amazing job1 I was laughing the entire way thorugh it! I especially loved Loki's part! omg so freakin hilarious! lol Great job and I can't wait for the next chapters!

Wow, it is a funny story
I wish u could continue writing tis
Can't wait to see all tis gods getting so angry with mayura comments