Aw! That was so cute! I like the "Bwahahaha" bits! But the whole story was cute, funny and romantic!
Luved it!

*sighs* ok well how shall i begin? i want to tell you that quite honestly i couldn't finish this...i stoped about half way. im not trying to flame you its not like it wasn't good or anything but it was hard to read with the constant ...s they were starting to drive me crazy! there are other was of showing a pause or a transition. there was also a lot of OOCness in it i'm glad that you made a horotamao tho theyre kinda rare

~Saphire Eyes91

so lovely! i saw your profile and i saw you were filipino! so, kamusta ka na kabababayab! lalang...:p! anyway.gawa aka pa ng mga ganitong klaseng ficcies! so LOVELY! kita ko friendster ka...add mo ako: rabbitoftheyear@yahoo.com
or ako na lang...para to lessen your work!

Eeh hee hee hee! i loved it! very fluffy *sighs* ^^~ Write another one!

so cute, lol this is like my recent couple obsession.. so cute!

tamad ako maglog in eh...
neway, nice fic. comments tho, ooc si tamao! lolz. but that can be improved ne? and what else...it would be better if you will just complete the sentences that you use and focus on one clear POV. hehe, un lng po!
pero maganda naman eh! ganda ng story!
*faints to death*

AWESOME! SCHWAY! I love this story! I can't wait for you to write more. Sometimes it was a lil confusing to understand, but your meaning was clear! Write more soon!

its okay but the what da hella dn the evil thoughts is kinda OCC for Tamao no offense just some suggestion i'm not saying its bad its reli good!

*gasps* KAWAII! KAWAII! KAWAII! KAWAII! KAWAII! KAWAII! KAWAii!! Horo/Tamao is my fave Mankin couple. This was soo cute. ehehe. ^^ Please continue to write more H/T fics.. they're so rare these days.. ^_^