Eep. Seriously though, you have talent. I mean just ... wow. This kind of writing just grabs at my heart and wrenches it.

Wow...this was well done. You have a true gift with words.

That was absolutely brilliant and this paragraph:

Harry remembered the way Tom’s hand grasped his own, the way his breath hitched as the blood continued to flow, the way his eyes changed, from red to black and then to a heartbreaking blue, the way that they anguished. He remembered the feeling of Tom’s fingers brushing his cheek, a last, burning movement before Tom’s eyes fluttered shut, the veins under his eyelids slowly turning an iridescent blue.

...was absolutely gorgeous. Well done, I really enjoyed this.

This is wonderful perfect gem of a fic. Perfect. Not one word too many not one word too few.

I write this with tears in my eyes for Tom and Harry who is Tom who is Harry and so on...

We create the monsters and teach them to kill forgetting they were monsters only because we didn't love them.

To say I will add you to my favourite suthors' list is such a small thing compared to the searing truth of your writing, but it's the only tangible thing I can offer. Wel, apart form a toast to your humane intelligence, long may it burn in you!

Thank you

*staring with huge eyes*
Wow... That was an amazing story. When all his friends showed up I felt like crying because it was so beautiful that they would be there to give him strength through their friendship... just to support him. God. And then when he held Tom's hand... oh, I can't describe what I felt then. It's a dark story, but it's a beautiful and hopeful one, too.
It's perfect. Simply perfect.

I just want to know where you come up with your ideas because your stories are amazing. I wish that I could write half as good as you do.

Omg, I loved this, and I don't even know why... Ne way, good job! *alter ego reaches for mouse, presses 'select all' then 'copy* STOP IT!

Breathtaking.

This was very good. Helps people understand what murder means to a 16 year-old boy of one so much like him. This is very descriptive and uses good vocabulary, and I don't think you had any spelling errors. Good job!

that was really angsty! u like to write abt angst dont u? well i liked it~!!

wow...
Wonderful, I'd say continue it, if it were not perfect just the way it was. If you do continue it... do it as a new story, please, becuase this is simply perfect as it is... another letter will ruin it. Trust me.