I'd love to know how this ends!Plaese countinue!I want to know about Trumans kid!

Another good fanfiction with many possibilities stopped after it had just begun, and unlikely to be touched again...oh well.

I like the other side of Christof! He's such an interesting character. This is really good, I'd love to see more!

Keep this going, I'm enjoying it.

Interesting idea. This portrays a darker vision of Christof than I prefer, but you have kept him as a very in-between good guy/ bad guy. Which is cool.
The exerts with the wedding were unnecessary, but add a nice touch. Overall this is a good piece. Neato!