I loved it! Can you wite another story exactly like this with other characters! I love you rape and lemon scenes!

Hey! Great story! However, I think there is a few issued with "he" and "she", There are a few scentences refering to male, but are in a scentence talking about a femal, if you get what I mean. Just wanted to know if that was intentional. But, I look forward to reading your awaiting chapters!

-Sin

You say in your disclaimer that: "maybe except not Simon Muran". You should really change him from the OC category to the YGH characters category then, because Simon doesn't belong in the former.

In Reply to shyshi:

Asha is a girl. At the time I was a bit younger when I wrote this so I did not notice to much the integrity of the human's more precise anatomy. Women actually do have adam's apples, but they are a lot less recognizable then a male's. Lol, it would be amusing, but no, the character is totally female heh.

"Seto whispered seductively as he leaned up to suck as the girl's Adam's apple."

...Asha's a dude?

Only guys have adam's apples.

Wasn't going to comment, until I read that piece. I don't think Seto would get her undressed without noticing that they have the same hardware. x)

-shyshi

Hey there!

I know you wrote this fic a while ago, and well i only came across it recently and have just finnished reading it. Wanted to tell you how much i enjoyed it! The ending is really sad but very moving. I'd love to read any sequals you write if you decide to write any that is.

I've been quite fond of the idea of Seto as a master for a while but i'd never thought of using his past life as the high priest for such a story line. Your idea works really well.

thank you for writing such a wonderful story!
yours
theMadNovelist

OMGawd, I loved your story. You're so talented. ^^

~!~Aaliyah Higurashi Reborn~!~

OMGawd, I loved it! ^^ Good job li'l un!

OH MY GOODNESS! i love ur story...can't wait to read the sequel! It's just so sweet...it's awesome! though some of the lemon bits were really...weird...but still, it's a good story though it does have some errors in it...it's still wonderful!

I can't wait to see what happens next.

That was great! You should make a sequel.

"Seto was at the point right now that it only hurt when he would breath."
My, that one line in this chapter reminded me so much of a song sung by Shinia Twain (Ironically titled "It only hurts when I breath") that I nearly cried, knowing exactly how he felt then.
Loverly story, I'm almost hesitant to finish it 'cause then it'd be over. ^_^
Keep writing more stories!

i love this story

I have only one question to ask...
Speedfax?

I really like this story, however i think the last chapter is unessersary. I thought this story ended at chapter 13 and i thought that was the PERFECT way to end it. Not knowing when Devlin would come back, and the joke between Marik and Bakura. In my opinion i think you should remove the last chapter and then start a carry over fanfic from this one which includes the whole chapter 14 aswell as them all reuniting in the future. I also thought there were just a few to many sex seanes in this fic, it was kinda repeatative. Over all I thought it was a great fic i really liked it! It was very funny! Keep up the good work!