he he he he he he he... very interesting!
LMAO!
inventive!

You made me laugh so hard, and it's very interesting, I'm at the Library, and people are giving me starnge looks. I'm giggling very loudly, actually...
Wine and vanilla,
D.W.L.Tonks

this is an awesome story. Its so great. Pretty good songs too. Write more! ^^
Lady Sanosuke

I enjoyed reading youtr story. i hope you add more to it soon.

Hey, very cute. Is Hermione gonna accidently tell Ron how she feels? I hope so! Love it! ~Pyra