Nice end to the series, but please translate Al Bhed cos I can't usually be bothered to.

Man this was so awesome. as well as alot of you other stories. ur a great author. Paine/Rikku forever. really good although it was so sad at the end

Hey, this one's good, too. Damn you :) How do you do it, write the best fanfics I ever seen? Honestly.

NO! Rikku! how COULD you?! oh well...

ow... she really did ** up. That sucks... (good writing though. ^_^)

oh no ... thats so sad and she yelled out Gipple too. poor paine. this better not be the last chapter! >.

OMG! I can't believe that Rikku did something that stupid and hurtful to Paine. Pls dun let it end like that.. *pleading puppy dog eyes*

DOH!! I CAN NOT believe Rikku ACTUALLY called out GIPPAL'S name while she having bedsport with Paine. There's no way Paine's going to forget this one anytime soon.
PLEASE hurry and write the next chapter. I want to see how Rikkue gets out of this one.

very well written, as always. Sad though. *sniff* lol. Keep it up kiddo. Your writting is very good. I enjoy your fics.

Great installment, very angsty, left me hanging, keep up the great work.
-jenn

THAT'S IT?! You'd better be lying. It's a nice conclusion but...wow...um...*lost for words* THAT'S IT?! WAH!! Ok. It's really short and there could've been a whole lot more to this...man...there could've been an entire fanfic about it but you ended it...sigh...disappointment. Oh well. You did a good job.
EverShadow signing off.

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Dryd fyc cu tabnaccehk! -cupc-
Pid oad, cu ehlnatepmo kuut!
Yht yd maycd E lyh meja ihtan dra luhcumydeuh dryd SM femm ryja y rybbean ahtehk! ;_;