 ilovechocolat17 2008-12-04 . chapter 1I love it! Really nice. XD |
 Hana Li 2005-08-15 . chapter 2I'm a big fan of the KK pairing, and I think you did a great job with their interaction. I also love how you started the story after they got together; it brings a new perspective to things. |
 XxRiseAgainstxX 2005-02-14 . chapter 2i love it!! |
 DarkFeenix 2005-01-29 . chapter 2very nice chapter, this is going to my hall of fame(meaning, fanfics folder on my comp :)) Only 1 problem, it's TOO SHORT. This thing is screaming for sequel ;_; I'll be a sad pup if you don't write one :( Absolutely loved the setting in bussiness world, and the aides you made. I could just praise you over evrey fact, but I don't think it's needed ;) Just please, write more GTO. |
 DarkFeenix 2005-01-29 . chapter 1me likes :) Kanzaki taking kikuchi to hotel seemed bit OOC, but since you started this story in middle of their relationship I can't say much on it. Anyway great chap, I'll read the next one tomorrow/later today.
If this isn't finished(as I belive) please continue writing it :)
author alerted for the time being |
 Crawfsh 2004-09-13 . chapter 1GREAT FIRST CHAPTER!
I really enjoyed the surprise towards the end. I would've liked to see a bit more into Kikuchi and Urumi's thoughts after Urumi said she had to leave Japan and they separated at her hotel. |
 Albert Diyosa 2004-08-12 . chapter 2another chapter, another great work from odd tailor :) i think it would be better if i would keep my imaginations to myself ;p weird people have weird imaginations, after all :) since this is the epilogue are you still planning on adding a new chapter after this? not because i'm nosy or anything, i just want to know because this is a good story [truly]. there were a few grammatical errors, but that's fine.. it's the content that counts [my motto in writing]. |
 ThebigW 2004-08-07 . chapter 2THE END?! Of just the chapter, right? Oh well, you certainly could have kept this going. Wonderful characterizations, only a few minor nits (renumeration s/b remuneration), but the dialog is so good, and Kanzaki disembarking at the airport... that's about right. Kikuchi had better get used to stinging cheeks with our favorite girl as his Mrs!
I'll be checking out your other offerings.
Regards.
W. |
 Prizz 2004-08-07 . chapter 2WHA! It's "THE END" already?? T_T Please dont be bad..an epilogue will do but if you can continue this story until they get married or get through their relationship, that would be better. Anything but "THE END". Please..Onegai..Parang awa mo na..T_T |
 Prizz 2004-05-01 . chapter 1Nice one! please continue this story or make some sequel! or make some more K/K fanfic!! Keep it up! |
 Albert Diyosa 2004-04-29 . chapter 1a great fic indeed.. ;) i just wish you elaborate what happened between urumi and kikuchi.. hee hee ^_^V are you going to continue this fic? i hope you do :) anyway, keep it up! :) |
 Miguel Artadi 2004-04-28 . chapter 1Whoa! Thanks for the props dude! =D
Excellent stuff you've got here! Hope you'd keep writing for the GTO section bro, you got great imagination there =)
-MA- |
 SILENT TROWA 2004-04-26 . chapter 1NIce. its good to see a new anime opeining up and getting filled with awesome material instead of a flood of meaningless crap. Your portrayal of Urumi and Kikuchi is Accurate at the LEAST. you have some nice talent and a very promising imagination. i see a lot odf potential in your work keep the faith dude. |