Oh my God, I loved this one too! It was so hilarious. And the idea of having Trowa narrate it, that was seriously awsome! Sweet Job!

hmm..pretty good story but i think it would've been better if it were longer. o well, thats ok, its still good. =)

this chapter was crazy one. =) it was very good.

That story was funny. I liked it.

i heard of the 'lord of the flies' book before. =) anyways, so far ur doing pretty good!! =D

Hehehe, so totally cool! I like it.

i really liked it! the only problem i could find is that it is incomplete... are you gonna finish it? if you, please advise me ok?

Interesting start. Please update!