Oh, that was so beautiful. You know how sometimes you read a story or listen to a song or look at a piece of art or something that just makes you completely leave your body? Well, that just happened. Your imagery in this story was beautiful, everything was so flowing and serene and pure and simple, but intricately so. Ah. I actually felt like I was flying up there. SO well done, well written, well thought. Brilliant. But that so is not the right word. Enchanting, maybe. Very graceful. Exquisite. Lovely. Ah. The English language doesn't have enough words!

I have not found writing so excellent online in a very long time. Your descriptions are so thorough; you just don't skip over anything. This entire chapter was image after image, flowing from one to the next smoothly and evenly. The movement was perfect, not rushed but not dragging either. Your comparisons are creative and your sentences unique. I loved the sentence, "hope that being a muggle-born witch didn't mean you were targeted for death by evil but targeted for greatness by light." The oxymoron of it is highly effective.

I've put you on my Favorite Author's list and this story on myu Favorite Stories list, and I've also checked the box that says "Highly recommend this story to others" though I'm not sure how that works. I think it's something new.

I've just started a Lily and James romance fanfiction story titled "Poetry Enchanted." It takes place during Lily and James's sixth year at Hogwarts. I love writing poetry, so there's a poem in every chapter. I'm amazed by your writing and I'd love for you to read it and critique it for me. It's always wonderful to have an excellent writer's opinion.

great story. email me when its updated

Wonderful job! I enjoyed reading this first chapter, and I trust that you have more coming!