Ya! Supporting characters finally getting some action!

This is a grate story man!

Keep it up!

.HACK forever!

(P.S. This is not a trap.)

Maybe im wrong maybe im right dude but i think kite/shugo and blackrose/rena are brother & sis but i dont know but i dont think elk/? is blackroses/renas brother as well but could they be triplets? NO! in this fanfic it said elk was two years YOUNGER than Kite/shugo and BlackRose/Rena. and dont you think that Blackrose/rena and kite/shugo look alike? CUZ' there're TWINS meaning bro & sis!

P.S

i dont know elk's real name can you please tell/e-mail me?

One thing. CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE!

lol very funny and cute too! great story

OMG! That was by far one of the best .hack fanfics I've read! :D Thanks so much for writing it, it really made me laugh so hard! _

Tera Ryo is 16. Kazu is 8. Dude what are you smoking? Did you even play the game...?

Aw...I luff that. It's not the same, generic, mundane KitexBlackRose you see everywhere. Of course, you wrote it, so of course it's not like that.

Wow. Nuke was in it. I like him. (Because Long Arms are my favorite class, and my sister brings Gardenia with her to every boss, so I just sorta...tote Nuke along.)

Well, it was light-hearted and silly, but cute. Adorable. Awesome. Just...yeah.

Poor Elk...*_*

.hack/GIFT roxxorz. Except for the nudity.

Please...for the love of sanity...less cuteness next time...urghh...

Bout time someone wrote a GOOD .hack story. its all cool just keep it up and dont listen to critics

It wasn't pointless at all! It was really funny and I liked the fluff. :D

This was so cute! XD God, I love your oneshots so much... 0 You're too good at writing KitexBlackRose, you know that? _ Like one of your previous reviewers said, I too was hoping for some more KitexBlackRose in this, but it's OK, I enjoyed the overall story a lot. :) Kazu is so cute... 0 I adore Terajima Ryoko when she's not crushing on Kite... truthfully, she's probably my second or third favorite female character right after BlackRose, but I don't want her with Kite. _

Just making my rounds and reviewing various stories...
This is quite a nice story, good job with it!
I love Marlo. Such a cool character. Love his Japanese voice, as well. (I don't dare play the game with the dub on. Too scared to.)
But, yeah, Marlo's VERY nicely in character. Just thought I'd mention that. ;
I can't say that I can imagine Elk doing that, though... O.o
I'm forced to agree with Terajima. b
"Her eyes were soft as she looked at him and he suddenly wondered if he could still speak.
“You look nice.

Aw, that was very good! I wouldn't mind seeing more like this! And yay, Marlo was in it, he isn't in enough fics. Very good as usual!

Wow, this is one of thos Good ol Humor Romance stories that I actually do indeed enjoy. Please, write just one more chapter for us loyal fans. Please? Please please? _

good story I wish there was a little more Kite x BlackRose