 JH Sounds 9/24/04 . chapter 1Boy, am I sorry I didn't review this sooner. Pretty much everything has already been said about how entertaining it is: Tightly wound plot, characters that always stay in character, well-developed antagonist, etc, etc.
I was so inspired by this story that I plan to tie it into the Matrix fic I'm currently working on. I won't say how, because that would spoil it.
I also added it to my C2 Archive. (see my bio) |
 XYZ 9/1/04 . chapter 11 Way cool story. Great characters, great plot. Looking forward to a sequel..
Actually, I figured out who the backup was before the end of chapter 7 ! |
 anon 8/31/04 . chapter 6 Suggest you stop using 'abyss' to name 'giovanni' at this point - spoils the surprise. |
 bobrox15 8/31/04 . chapter 11Simply amazing, hope I get my other fanfics up soon, I need to fix my comp. You're very good and I wish you luck on your other fanfics |
 bobrox15 8/6/04 . chapter 10Awsome! I'm having computer troubles right now so I know what it's like, I'm going to try and continue my Matrix story soon. |
 bobrox15 7/13/04 . chapter 9Awsome work on yet another chapter! |
 Shadow 7/1/04 . chapter 8 I have nothing to say im stuned...that was a really well writen chapter well its late cant wait to see the next chapter |
 Shadow 7/1/04 . chapter 7 That was brilliant the whole backround of abyss and every thing kudos to u arch |
 Shadow 7/1/04 . chapter 6 Yo, that was a really good chapter love the fight sceen alot. grate ending |
 bobrox15 7/1/04 . chapter 8Great work on another 2 chapters. I think I've figured out Who holds the backup program.
Good luck on the next chapters. |
 bobrox15 6/30/04 . chapter 6Awsome story, I can't wait till the next chapter.
It's some sort of coincidence that one of the ships on my Matrix fanfic is called the Archangel.
good luck, keep up the good work. |
 bobrox15 6/29/04 . chapter 5Awsome story! I'd read the next Chapter but It's too late at night. great work. |
 bobrox15 6/29/04 . chapter 3This Chapter was even better than the last.
I have a bad feeling about Siren. |
 bobrox15 6/29/04 . chapter 2WOW! this just keeps getting better |
 bobrox15 6/29/04 . chapter 1Awsome story so far. I've only read chapter one.
I'm also working on a Matrix fanfiction. |