Im not really shure what to think of it. Your are a very talented writer who is not afraid to write what ever you want. Thats all I have to say for now

poor hermione, heh... i bet the other dude was draco malfoy... n e wayss...

very kool...interesting

wow... this is different... i dont normally read h/h, but i like this one... in a twisted sort of way u know? its very um... well different! lol... keep it up and wirhg tmnore of youyr other storys too! i love reading those also!
*Calla-ForEvEa*

I Like it. Even though harryw as well...gay. It's all 'good' - you wrote it well.
Who was he shagging? Or was it supposed to be a mystery?
Well done! =D

harry turned out to be...gay. that sucks, but still it was a great story. you really are a very talented writer. nice work! -leah

I love it! I really like it, how it seems so real, and sort of... poetic. You're such a great writer, I love you!