Wow!...O.o...I totally love your story!>/< OMG!! It's was so good!! My heart stop beating when I read chapter 10(I was dead some minute ago. Look-> Flash back: X_X)
Hum, hum...so anyway... I love this couple so much!! KYO X TOHRU FOR 4EVER! If only I could write something that beautiful(Well first, I should problably write one before!!LOL!! So not funny ¬.¬) Anyways,...I got nothing else to said...Oh yes, did I tell you that your story was really really really(add 10 more) good(Yes, I did!!¬.¬)
That's all!!^.^

I will read all your other story!^.^

BEAUTIFUL STORY! >w

The ending is so powerful! You are a very good writer!

..It's beutiful. It reminds me of my own situation. I'm sure that everything will turn out ok for them. This story is awsome. Beutiful. Breathtaking!

this made me cry so much. but finally kyo and tohru get together YAYNESS you are an awesome writer you know that?

Good Job

You need to edit a part, it says brown hair brown /eyes/, they need to be blue. At first I thought it was someone else and I screamed, then it took me a second to see it was a typo. ^^' Better fix that babe, or else more people shall scream in frustration.

Adue

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No! No No No! Tohru, you get off of that plane, this instant! Ugh. =_=

You? Yeah, you're the reason I'm crazy. xD

Lt. RaIQ

(If you couldn't tell, I really love your writing, I've been sitting here for 3 hours. xD)

I am /so/ gonna kill you. I'm planning and plotting right now. DAngit, he was supposed to /listen/!! Not turn the bass up! Stupid cat! Ugh!

Lt. RAIQ

I"M GOING TO KILL YOU FOR LEAVING THAT CLIFF HANGER! NO!

*Dies*

Lt. RaIQ

Oh come /on/, get on with it Yuki! Bah. Stupid tabloids with their stupid pictures. Bah. =_=

Lt. RAIQ

Go after her you idiot! Sheesh! You'd think that guys had seen enough chick flicks to know that the /guy/ chases the /girl/ and vice versa!! Ugh. Men.

Lt. RaIQ

Loveth story, favs!

WHAT?! Kagura's leaving him?? No! They're like, perfect!! (In this story, not manga because in the manga, they're family and that's... eww. xD;; )

NUH!

Lt. RaIQ

Aw, poor Tohru. Rivers are fun to swim in, but not to die in! Go Kyo! xD

Lt. RAIQ

NO!


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