It has been a while, but I knew I'd get to this story eventually. Facinating ending did so enjoy it. I like that you kept Link in character to the very end - very nice -well I guess I'm off to read the new story.

achitka

DON DON DON! GANONDORF KILLED THE TIME STREAM! Well uh... actually we don't know that.. but uh... wow... the master sword shattered? DANG! I hope that sequal comes soon!

woah, something's wrong, why are so many people dead? what has happened?!

OH creepy ^.^ can't wait to find out whatthe heck is going on ! >.< Avvi rocks my socks off, and her unatural eyes do too I supose... update soon!

DON DON DON! that's not good... hopefully we will know what will happen soon!

two worsd for this fic: Kick **!

good.

oh boy, that damn glowing ball of light that everyone hated "Oh, I have no idea where his weak spot is. I'm sorry" but still, what is happening? will they be alright? will they die? Is Gannon coming back? will I stop asking stupid questions? (I doubt it)

this is getting so good...still trying to peice kai and avvi into the picture but that may be because i'm slow.good luck with school update soon ^.^
-Lenipez sideshow

I am such a lazy slacker reader. Hope school is going well and I enjoyed the chapter a good deal. Only got a little lost at the end. Good work - be looking forward to more.

good.

You spelled "Spiritual?" incorrectly

Other than that, it's pretty good. Interestingly different

This is such a good story. It's something completely different form the other 'Link-thief' stories. And Avvi, she is just the coolest person ever. I love how she took the safety off her gun. >:) so evil. Write more soon!

~Jaderill

woah, so Link IS the Hero, but in a way, so are Avvi and Kai... bi-zarre!

as always i can't wait for the next update. your story is so original ^.^ okay update soon
~the leni