It's better then I imagened it!! Poor Rainbow Brothers! T-T

Please write more, and do you take OCs?

Poor Goku.. still got the gods after him for what he did five hundered years ago... And most of evil after his power to since he was born from Earth and the five heavenly scriptures. Lirrin.. I feel so sorry for.. sounds more like Sanzo's past though..

Heheh, learn about those cars from my papa. He's a helpful guy.
The chapter's long, which is actually okay with me. Just don't make it TOO long, otherwise I'll get confused. Try to involve the Sanzo-ikkou more often. This IS a Saiyuki fic, right?

Ryoko is one of their classmates, right? *bonks head* Sorry... but I think my memory's having difficulty remembering details... Anyway, there are so many secrets here! I can't believe how you get your ideas!
Uhh... just one hint... I do see less Hakkai and Gojyo here... Mind putting them more on the later chapters?

Quite confusing, but if you make it clear in the next chappie, i think my headache won't be coming.
The 'Feared Children' stuff reminds me of Get Backers (do you know the anime/manga?), although not in terms of the reasons the 'Feared Children'. Probably the term used in reference to two characters (Himiko Kudou and her bro, Yamato)'cause they are these people who were born as those...who would lose their minds anytime in their life...like behaving like a monster, I guess. Once they, do, it is Sayonara. Anyways, it's only the term used. Nothing related to the story.
Hey, I think they should use BMW instead of Merc. Ferrari is good, but not as a passenger car. BMW would be nice.

Finally an update! Lemme see...things are getting complicated. WAY COMPLICATED (i ain't listenin' to avril lavigne's song). Anyways, update ya story.

ShuRei: curiouzkatt, no wonder Sapphire-Amethyst treats you as her one-chan! you're story's really great esp. the one in animespiral! (S.A. made me read it!) they're very indulging indeed! I hope that you'll continue your writings, not like me that I can't even make good fanfics! ja ne! nice story!!

ONE-CHAN! (S.A.: Hehe...^-^) Oh! How I've missed reviewing! I AM SO BUSY! (Sanzo: *covering ears and clenching teeth* Will you tone down a bit?! S.A.: All right! All right!) *coughs then smiles again* You're right! High school is fun but difficult, especially in Phil. Sci. Sometimes, there are too many homework while sometimes my schedule is too tight! (S.A.: Argh! I'm doing an outline of my autobiography, and I'm only SECRETLY trying to do this together with my project!) Then... uh-oh! Math is so scary! Our teacher is both cheerful and tight! *sighs* Wish I will survive this year... Sorry if I only reviewed now... As I said, there're to many homework to be done and my schedule is too tight... *sighs again* (Sanzo: *smirks* S.A.: *glares*)

Anyway... So... Linlin's family is rich, huh? Nice! Linlin's mother is so simple! But you really embarrassed Hakkai and Gojyo for making them wear suits! I'd love to see that! *laughs* Please update!

Nice fic, update asap!

I can imagine Gojyo wearing all those...wow.
Keep writing!

Nice story. Keep on writing. Can't wait for da next chaptaa.

Nice! Ragnarok! Do you play it? I play it! Only once in a while though… Woohoo!! This story's rocking! It's gotta be one of my favorites! Woohoo! Update, update, update!

You know, I've read this story. I'm just reviewing now. I never knew Sanzo can bring trouble! Hehe... looks like the blond monk made a mistake! (Sanzo: Urusai!)
Hehe... I feel sorry for Linlin. Her brother died! Huhuhu... T_T Please update!