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Joe's girl
2006-09-08
ch 1,
abuseI just happened to come across this and read it. It was wonderful. I really liked how you answered all of those unanswered questions that were raised by the fact that Chappelle does wear a wedding ring and the book lists wife and children. That always bothered me, but I have to admit I didn't put much effort into thinking it our. They did the same thing in season 5 with Karen Hayes. She wears a wedding ring but then Bill asks her out in the last episode. Unless they are suggesting that Bill likes to hit on married women, there needs to be an explanation. I was so bothered by that that I ended up writing an explanation into one of my stories like to did here just to give myself some closure. (I know. I really need to get a life!)

ANyway, good story. Glad I found it.
Kersi
2004-05-10
ch 1,
abuseHey Bigi, that was great writing. Even with not knowing much of the background you had me captivated with the emotions. Thanks for sharing your work.
Mary
2004-05-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was excellent. Absolutely beautiful.
Christina Miller (too lazy ...
2004-05-05
ch 1, anon.
abuse"Particularly adept at ** people off."
Yeah, that sounds like Chappelle. I always noticed the ring and thought, "good golly, how could anyone be married to him?" Interesting twist with the family. I liked how his kids have made their work their lives, just like their dad. Hope you write more.
Imaj Inaya
2004-04-28
ch 1,
abuseI did indeed wonder why Chapelle had no intention to tell his wife or children goodbye. He said he had a brother, and even that didn't matter. This is a very decent explaination of everything, thanks! It's a very lovely piece.
Kellifer Monkey
2004-04-28
ch 1,
abuseI was falling for that until you mentioned siblings. I didn't know about 'his' family but like the idea of opening up other relationships in CTU.
You write everyone's guilt very well. It's a shame that when it comes to funerals there is so much of it left over. Thanks for sharing.
AG-9
2004-04-28
ch 1,
abuseOh wow! This was so sad. At first I thought it was about Kim because Caitlin's life is so similar to hers.
This was really good!!
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