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| Joe's girl 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseI just happened to come across this and read it. It was wonderful. I really liked how you answered all of those unanswered questions that were raised by the fact that Chappelle does wear a wedding ring and the book lists wife and children. That always bothered me, but I have to admit I didn't put much effort into thinking it our. They did the same thing in season 5 with Karen Hayes. She wears a wedding ring but then Bill asks her out in the last episode. Unless they are suggesting that Bill likes to hit on married women, there needs to be an explanation. I was so bothered by that that I ended up writing an explanation into one of my stories like to did here just to give myself some closure. (I know. I really need to get a life!) ANyway, good story. Glad I found it. |
| Kersi 2004-05-10 ch 1, | abuseHey Bigi, that was great writing. Even with not knowing much of the background you had me captivated with the emotions. Thanks for sharing your work. |
| Mary 2004-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was excellent. Absolutely beautiful. |
| Christina Miller (too lazy ... 2004-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuse"Particularly adept at ** people off." Yeah, that sounds like Chappelle. I always noticed the ring and thought, "good golly, how could anyone be married to him?" Interesting twist with the family. I liked how his kids have made their work their lives, just like their dad. Hope you write more. |
| Imaj Inaya 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI did indeed wonder why Chapelle had no intention to tell his wife or children goodbye. He said he had a brother, and even that didn't matter. This is a very decent explaination of everything, thanks! It's a very lovely piece. |
| Kellifer Monkey 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI was falling for that until you mentioned siblings. I didn't know about 'his' family but like the idea of opening up other relationships in CTU. You write everyone's guilt very well. It's a shame that when it comes to funerals there is so much of it left over. Thanks for sharing. |
| AG-9 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! This was so sad. At first I thought it was about Kim because Caitlin's life is so similar to hers. This was really good!! |