Awesome, the ending was purely poetic, and it was incredible. Great, very powerfull and chilling.

amazing!

Wow, this was *seriously* dark. Wow. It's fantastically written, and you've got a great style. Experience of cutting, perhaps? (Maybe not, but it's just the way you described it; as a (hopefully former) cutter I should know).

Interesting story, I look forward to more!
Check my story if you ever have the time =)

this is sad... but good written.