This is one of the most well written stories I have read in six years. Fabulous portrayal of all characters. You did a great job with the Draco/Harry relationship as well. Congrats on making it truly believable and not just rushing them into the pairing because "instincts and magic say so."

Oh hell, I can't remember what happens next! This is such good writing I'm dying from the anticipation. God you're good.

Love your humor :D

this is nit picky and I'm sorry but "two of the Roman goddess Athena" Athena is a Greek goddess Minerva is the roman counterpart

The epilogue was great, i realy did get a few laughs out of it. I've read this story before, but had not reveiws so i am thrilled to have found it again.

YAY! *VERY ENTHUSIASTIC (AND A LITTLE HYPER) CLAPPING!*

OMG! Purple and Gold are my school colors!

what a wonderful touching story. thank you ever so much

Oh my goodness this chapter actually made me cry. Thats never happened to me before while reading!The memories were so touching and the wording so lovely that it felt like i was watching the scenes in my head, if that makes sense! Off to read the rest now!

I have absolutely adored this story! A true wonder in and of its self! Thank you so much for finishing it and putting so much thought and energy into it!

KCK-Lumcer

luv the description of Veriae at the bottom lol

heeheehee

This is such a great story, but I can't help but think of the Veriae rebirth as a kind of 'avian menstrual cycle' heheh is that like the bird flu??

Just amusing, that's all.

Hi - great story, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.

I wanted to recommend for you the writing of a good friend (and former university housemate and classmate of mine) named Kyla, who's written another excellent Potter fanfic. The reason I recommend it is that her quality of writing is very comparable to yours (that is to say, quite good) and like you, she entwines very well thought out and detailed new concepts into the existing Potterverse while staying true to the characters.

Anyways - her story can be found by doing an author search for 'Apothecary in Training' (we were pharmacy students together). I hope you check it out and enjoy it, if you review her and mention I recommended you it would make her day, cause she's in the middle of exams lol.

Thanks again for the great story.

Cheers - Stewart Mawdsley
UofAlberta Medicine
Class of 2012

I just wanted you to know that i started this story @ 4:oo this afternoon, and i did not stop until now because i just had to finish it...it's 11:44 btw. Your story was well written and well executed. The plot was original and fresh. I thouroghly enjoyed it. Definately on of the better ones that I've read. I hope that you continue in your fanfiction career/hobby because you have a talent that should be displayed so that everyone can appreciate it as I did. Thank You.

Possibly one of the best Harry Potter/ Draco Malfoy fanfictions I have read. If this had been written before the concept of Harry Potter had come about, then it would still make for fantastic reading and, especially when the black wings were described, an absolutely epic movie. Apart from possibly a couple of spelling mistakes (I'm not sure if you are in a different country to me and so would have different spellings, and I can't for the life of me remember where they are)it was very well written, with a brilliant plot and captivating the whole way through. Definitely a 10/10 :)