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| x Red Rose x 2005-02-28 ch 3, | abuseaww so sweet! u hav 2 carry on! the letter was absolutly brilliant! :) plzplzplz UPDATE! |
| kateydidnt 2004-07-01 ch 3, | abusegreat story so far! I look forward to more. |
| Butler 2004-05-21 ch 3, | abuseI liked it. Will it be continued? |
| snakedancer 2004-04-29 ch 2, | abuseWhoa. I know I'm going to annoy you by giving a "review" of every chapter, but oh well. I love Lupin's dig at Snape right in the beginning - ("Despite my lycanthropy, Severus," came Lupin's voice coolly, "I have maintained a healthy body and a positive mindset. I will not allow myself to become a galling, loveless, crusty man." He paused. " Like you.") For someone who doesn't much like confrontation, you write it amazingly well. |
| snakedancer 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abuseHello, darling. It looks lovely. I've only had time to read the first chapter, but I love it! I shall read the rest when I return from school. (I can't even demand MORE yet, since I haven't read it all. Damn.) |
| JadedEcho 2004-04-27 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting first chapter. It really struck me about halfway through it that it felt like I was reading a Harry Potter book. I think you've definitely got some of JK's style in there. Everyone is also very IC, which is always a good thing. I'll have to read more later to see how this turns out. |