Nice fic! I can believe I had right about Bellatryx and James! It was a surprice anyway, something I've never read about before, but really had make sense :)

I've wanted to read an story where Harry just ends up with a muggle girl as his girlfriend, and this his the second story that start that way, but end's in the "wizarding" worl anyway... well, I suppose that I need to keep searching :)

Nice story, thanks for sharing :)

this was a great chapter... are you implying that Bellatrix had and infatuation towars Harry's father, just like Snape had one with his mother? I'm really curious now :)

A nice story. And thank you for following your instincts about not making it longer than it was. I certainly understand your envy of people who can crank out novel-length fics, but in some ways I think it's harder to write a shorter story than a longer one. Thanks for sharing your talent.

A very well written story, I read the entire story from beginning to end.. in one go!
And I'm not sure whether you intended to male the reader feel any pity for Bella at the end there, but I think I did..

Just found this one after reading Sleepwalking. OMG this was so awesome! Great Job! The writing was so wonderful, kind of like the volin solo in Sharazad. Boy, you sure know how to make the rest of us hacks feel.

super story, I really enjoyed it. Yes, how about a sequel? Best regards kyoshi

wonderful you should continue or create a series out of it please!

This is excellent! Just too bad that Quin turned to Bellatrix Lestrange... it would have turned to something good if she was just Quin...

Keep up the good work! and please update!

Well done! I really see this could have fallen into the Series storyline.
Now I'll see if there's a sequel!

;-)

dennisud

So far a very good story, and to think I was trolling the forums and found the one with your story init. There's to many stories for the HP section on FFn so I feel lucky to have found it!

I can't wait to finish it!

dennisud

Aw !
That What So Good.
Very Well Written.
I Give It A 9/10.
Job Well Done.
10 Cookies For YOU!
xx

Wow! I loved this story -- simply brilliant! I just thought you should know that if your story is finished, then you might want to change the setting to 'completed' otherwise future readers will see it as unfinished. I have to admit that when I read this summary, I wasn't expecting an amazing fic but... I also have to admit that you proved me wrong. This story was amazing. It was well-written, nicely-flowing, beautiful chapter lengths and you showed us a softer side of Bella. That takes great writing. I must say that I always did suspect Quinn of being a death eater, but never Bella... great work. Also, the charm that Voldemort used over Bella was quite obvious when you mentioned it earlier, in the book. Just thought I'd state my opinion -- when I read it, I was all, "Oh, that's definatly going to be used.." and that made me suspect Quinn even more.

Just thought I'd point out though that as a child it was Bellatrix *Black* not Lestrange. True, they were Sirius' cousins, but Bella married a Rodolphus Lestrange and that's how she became Bellatrix Lestrange. Another tip, is to watch Hagrid's enunciation - he doesn't speak properly, rather 'e speaks like 'e 'as a funny arcent. Well, I can never get it right either, but he really doesn't speak properly.

Great work on this -- fabulous! (Going on my favourites list!) I really, *really* hope you've written a sequel! If not, at least another story by you! Your style is fantastic. Love it.

xox Caramel

LUV IT!

GR8!

Very good story. There's something happening all the time that is relevant and exciting. It was a relieve to see Harry Potter characters cursing as all teenagers do, a little extra piece of realism that I thought made a nice touch to your story. I also was impressed by the believability of the characters actions and situations. Clearly you have a talent for writing and I hope you conitnue to write.