Beautiful! You make a different point in using different point of views and I gotta tell you I love it! So yeah, Great job.

I love this! I love the way the pieces fit together, and that you've brought Lane out of the woodwork. Stellar.

Wow. This was different and well crafted. Your imagination is incredible; there's no other way you could come up with the stories you do otherwise. I commend you for that. :) My favorite part of this particular story is all of the omniscient thoughts. We hear everyone's voice...all talking about the same thing. It's pretty cool. Thanks for writing it.

This really is wonderful.

This was absolutely beautiful. I love bittersweet fic and I usually think they're more realistic (especially when it concerns the LL relationship). My favorite part was the Luke and Lane scene. Lane's thought of how could any one NOT see Luke was almost heartbreaking in its sadness and honesty. I loved this.

That was wonderful. Not surprising; your writing always is. I think one of the best parts about fanfic is getting inside the minds of the characters, and you do that so well. I especially like the last part. It took me a minute to figure out who it was- Trix, looking down on everyone. The last few lines are especially poignant.

Cool!! this is really good!! plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan

Haunting and humorous... and they said it couldn't be done. Seriously, Netherfield, you never fail to amaze me with your writing. While most stories are simply entertaining yours always seem so meaningful and, well, for lack of a better term, deep. Sometimes there's nothing more to say than OMG--this piece is absolutely beautiful.

Great fic as usual netherfield.
~*~Di Di~*~ from FF

Oh, netherfield, this is beautiful. Simply beautiful. So haunting and so wonderfully woven together. We don't often get a glimpse into the inner workings of Stars Hollow's supporting players and your story is why I wish we would. One of my favorites from you, and that's saying something.

Lovely. Just lovely.