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| rtms 2005-08-08 ch 42,  | abuseGreat story so far. I would ask that you make the scene transitions better. You jump from one scene to the next with no intro and it's makes it hard to follow the story. For instance you have Syd over at Paige's house talking and suddenly your over at Syd's house with her mother. A little sentence like..." Over at Syd's house ..." would make it less jarring. |
| Lil Aussie Alias Chick 2005-06-24 ch 42, | abusegreat chap! |
| AliasSpyCrazy 2005-06-23 ch 42, | abuseHey that was awesome. I hope you update soon. I love your fic its the best. |
| ArodLoverus2001 2005-06-21 ch 42, | abuseLOL! that was great!! plz update soon! |
| higherbeingfriendsfan 2005-06-20 ch 42, | abuseAww, bless Vaughn, I can't believe that Jack did that to him. I love Irina though, she's always telling ** lol |
| AliasSpyCrazy 2005-06-13 ch 41, | abuseCol. You finally updated. I hope to see more soon. I really liked it. You did a good job. Cant wait for more |
| Lil Aussie Alias Chick 2005-06-12 ch 41, | abuseAnother great chapter as always! |
| ArodLoverus2001 2005-06-12 ch 41, | abusethat was great! plz update soon! |
| higherbeingfriendsfan 2005-06-11 ch 41, | abuseSweet chapter, I'm glad Sydney and her mam made up, looking forward to what happens next :) |
| rtms 2005-06-11 ch 41, | abuseGreat chapter, but when is Nadia going to show up? |
| AliasSpyCrazy 2005-06-07 ch 2, | abusegod one |
| vaughn is hot 2005-05-27 ch 40, | abuseooh yay! the s/v is getting so exciting! update soon |
| ArodLoverus2001 2005-05-27 ch 40, | abusepor syd & mike! lol getting caught by the parents! can't wait 4 more plz update soon! |
| Lil Aussie Alias Chick 2005-05-27 ch 40, | abuseAnother completely wonderful chapter - omg i cannot believe how over the top irina was! It's syd's life. |
| AliasSpyCrazy 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abusecol |