DUDE YOUR THE ONLY LOYAL PERSON ON FF.net THIS STORY IS FROM 2001 ANND TO THIS DAY YOU STILL WRITE THEM! I hope I can remeber my password tht long and not get bored with this.

i watch pokemon. but, i really can't.. gary, ash... but, i like the way you wrote it! if they were not themselves... hm

Hyum. Interesting. I love the ending.

Now I read this a long time ago, but it seems I forgot to review.

You did very well with this. It gives Gary depth that is hardly shown throughout the show.

Gotta love the last line. And this is completely IC. Very good job.

BTW: Believe it baby! Pokemon ROCKS!

Sorano

This is sweet _ I love the ending of it!

Wow...that's good! *Really* good! Awesome point of view here, and I think you pulled it off perfectly! It really makes me want to read more Poké-fics... _

I've always wanted to know, what pokemon did Gary choose first? Anyway, your fic's good.

Aw, that was cute. Wait, did I just compliment a pokemon fic? *strangles herself*... Oh well, it was cute anyways _

Oh, so cute! I love your analysis of Ash and Gary when they first met. The irony of the situation just gets me. Wow...

Cool. You should write a sequel, like when Gary loses at the Pokemon League.

Good fic. The only thing is, that doesn't sound like the Gary _I_ know.

I wasn't sure if I was going to like this since it was only 2Kb, but I really like this. Short, sweet, and to the point. Very unlike me. I like this Gary P.O.V. thing, I like the way you wrote it. And as for the last three sentances *not including -End.-*, why I do believe you might have another one coming up. Please, I hope I'm right, because you're a great author.

very creative...

Nice, luv it, pls. write a sequel

Oooooooo...tecnically in the show, It didn't say that Gary knew Ash, so this works! Go Gary! _ Great job!