Reviews for Last Golden Summer

Reviews For: Last Golden Summer

Jose Cohen 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseI didn't have very happy teenage years (and I spent my summers in literally the worst country on earth), and though I usually don't go in for angsty or romancey fan fiction, there was something cathartic about seeing a story that echoed the bittersweet memories of my own past acted out by characters from the only Hanna-Barbera cartoon I ever liked. If you're still reading reviews, thank you.
thekitten'smeow 2007-10-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh my goodness it chopped my review ;.; I'm Neko-Mitsuko by the way I went full explanation about what I thought would happen after too I'm sad now I'm going to go huddle in some corner now wondering what went wrong that my review ended up being cropped. I might draw swirlies on the carpet too...nah I'm just kidding I'm not so pathetic to be put out by a cropped review but it does make me kind of sad, I put a lot of thought into that review.
Neko-Mitsuko 2007-10-09 ch 1,	abuseI feel lucky, I tripped looked down and instead of finding a new lucky penny, I found your fic it seems my old lucky penny had a little luck left after all o^-^o I really enjoyed your fic it made me want to behave out of character and squeal in girlish glee. >.> ->
Iliveforwriting 2007-09-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseOkay,Pleeze pleeze pleeze pleeze, I am begging you! Write Patrick Velma pairing stories No one will! I am trying to submit my stories, so Pleeze! Can we work together to have more Patrick velma Pairings!! PLEEZE!
Devynn 2007-07-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. Not much more I can say. Do you write proffessionally? If you don't, you should!
princess-elli100 2006-02-23 ch 1,	abusehonestly, i am a total fred/velma shipper, so of course i'd think it ended like that... well, anyways, awesome job on the story. this is probably the longest one-chapter story i have ever read (lol) and thats a good thing, cause i have a very low attention span but this story held my interest long enough to let me finish it.
mel 2005-03-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really loved this story. It brought about a great wave of nostalgia, for I myself have been through this, with similar results too. The title is well-chosen and it is just such a relevation when one looks in retrospection to the last time they were 'innocent' and 'simple', isn't it? I would highly recommend this to anyone who wants to read a genuinely sentimental piece. Congrats to you for such realistic portrayals of the transitions from kids to adults; and in character too. It was very touching and it is one of the best pieces of FF I have ever read. BTW the open-end of the story is very appropriate, as it allows the reader to 'choose' their own ending as they like. On that note, it's interesting to see what people have to experience before they realise what is precious to them in life. Well done!!
Erica Dawn 2004-09-16 ch 1,	abuseI'm a Seth Green fan so I'm totally for her getting together w/ Patrick although it seems to me that Patrick is secretly Jacobo's son.
Beth C 2004-05-10 ch 1,	abuseI loved this story! I've always thought that Velma would end up with Shaggy myself. :) Keep up the good work! I look forward to more stories from you in the future!
Chloe 2004-05-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis story is great, you write very well, I have nothing against Fred, Patrick, or Ethan but I would love it if Shaggy and Velma would get back together for whatever reason there could be.
Mlle. D 2004-04-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh, man, I loved this. And even though I had beta read the first half, I hadn't seen the ending of it. I think you filled in the SD 2 plotholes quite well, especially by answering how Velma's hair suddenly grew about 6 inches longer! You also did a good job of tying up some loose ends from that last fic of yours, "What If..." And it was nice to see how Fred reacted to the "new" Velma--it resolved what had been hinted at in the beginning of the fic about Fred's and Velma's changing relationship and how they saw eachother. The beginning part was wonderful, too--sadness mixed with nostalgia and longing. It's not easy to "shrink the characters" like that, but you did a good job of portraying the "hormonally charged" Fred w/o sounding overly 'sexual' or scientific. Good job.
RandomTwirler 2004-04-27 ch 1,	abuseThis was a very sweet little story and I loved it... I hope that you could possibly even try to write furthur on this universal subject. I have written stories of all different genres, but I have yet to write a Scooby Doo story. I think that this piece has inspired me to try one out. Again, I love this story and would love for you to pursue this subject furthur. I would love to see what you could come up with. Tootles for now, ~Raven~

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