A great story. Very good.

Oh...very nice. I love the way you portray Maul. Please say you'll update soon!
~Crow

Woa Frodo,
that was a very interesting start, it was a little short but still very well done. You better continue this story, I think it has some really great potential. I can't wait for Obi Wan's reaction to meeting up with this creature. Please continue soon!

-Merry

Wow I really liked the story, and I love Darth Maul and this is getting interesting. Would like to find out more about this 'new' darth maul and how he came to be there. Plz continue.

Hmm...his daughter, then? Intresting...odd, but intresting. A little cliche at times ("you'll get what's coming to you..."), but a good beginning. Liked the "dropped a few credits onto the table for the mess" line. Reminds me of Solo.

Good story! Please continue!

Wow what's this? A female Darth Maul impersonater? Interesting! I have to know where this is going. Great job. Update soon.