I LOVE YOU! Man I know ALL about the uprising in mary-sues! THEY'RE BUILDING AN ARMY! I just want to read some good Hiei Kurama so I do a search for Hiei, Kurama and romance and get endless "HieixOC KuramaxOC" This fic is light in a dark, dark, sad, world. I love this fic and I really hope you do more! Also so far the three pairings you have mentioned are my top three favorites! I am so glad someone is finally giving mary-sues the type of fic they deserve! Thank you again! You are a heroine to yaoi/shounen-ai and my revered goddess. You are awesome!

Not Yusuke! I dunt see him beinh yaoi with anyone, he's good with keiko to me, but not a mary-sue"!1

*twitch* so. evil.
so update afore they die of that perfume lol

LMAO! I like how you have it. I agree with the fact that there are WAY too many Mary-Sues and CYOAs...(HATE the Inu xovers where Kagome is a Mary Sue) I enjoy your torture of the Mary Sues as well.

This is really hilarious! I love to see Mary-sues get defeated!

I've got a gift for Kurama and Hiei. *pulls out a whatchamacallit* This watchamacallit was designed by my friend Sarah. She also named it, but I forget what it was called. You just click the little button here and it creates a force field that keeps everyone else ten feet away! Isn't it cool?

She invented it to keep away her physco-killer cat, but it should work on Mary-sues, too!

Whack the 'Sues on the head for me and update soon!

Can we pretend this review is for the second chapter so that I can have a copy of the tape? Please?

LOL LOVE your fic! Mary-sue bashers are great! Please continue!

Can we pretend this review is for the second chapter so that I can have a copy of the tape? Please?

LOL LOVE your fic! Mary-sue bashers are great! Please continue!

Here you are!! One steamin hot delicious review!! How do ya like that? heheh!!I like this! what does CYOA stand for? I dun pay attention...anywho, you are funny and a good authoress...I wish I couls let you read summa my fics, but it says my account is no longer active...pity, ne?

O I want a video! I have an eight hour shot of Kurama/Hiei action! This story is SO COOL! (Has said like probably ten times already) *pouts* The nosebleed thing is the.. thing... where an anime/manga character boy gets a nosebleed if he hears something inapropriet? Well, YOU MUST CONTINUE! I'LL CRY ON YOU WITH MY BLACK, OILY TEARS OF DOOM IF YOU DON'T!

*eyes get all big* I'm.. like... a MARY SUE! T_T! I like can't even help like saying like like... every two words! I don't like normally TYPE like this, but, like, I do TALK like this! *gos to, like, normal type-faze*
Your story's really good! Too bad you wrote it, I WAS going to write one... before I realized...
*shudders* *goes of to stab herself in the eyes or something to heal her icky-likenessy-like, ways!*

Oh I love it.
There isn't another thing I hate as much as pairing the Yu Yu Hakusho gang (specially Hiei and Kurama) to Mary Sues.
Write more!

I like it! Please continue soon! I wanna know what's up with Crystal. I think I know, but I could be wrong...
Great fic, it's very funny!

I like it! Very funny!

Hm...I wonder! What IS Crystal doing with her phone? *gasp* Could it be that she is texting her boyf* and she doesn't want Sakura to know about it!!?Well...from my view, I KINDA ( and I mean kinda) like Crystal better than Sakura...but hey,they're still Mary-Sues. And yay! You're gonna add Jin and Touya!! Please make them a couple! Please! (I haven't seen a JinxTouya fic recently) By the way...it got late...but nice chapter!

Don't forget...one of the Mary Sues needs to be related to one of the original characters. And they all need to think Kuwabara's disgusting, stupid, and perverted because he's not as handsome as the other boys...-_- :P
Anywho, while I like the message you're trying to get across, and while the fiction remains rather humorous, the characterization bothers me. I guess it's fine for these types of stories, but you're more or less blatantly making fun of mary-sues than writing an actual story to set a good example for other authors...