|Reviews for Two Children|
| LaYdI tOmOe 3/23/12 . chapter 1
Like it! Cute and pretty.
| When Darkness Rises 1/23/11 . chapter 1
Besides the random Japanese in the middle and Hiei's age (he may look young, but he's quite old relatively and if Kurama's in it...)
ANYWAYS, I thought it was adorable. :D
| iheartsinuyasha 8/20/10 . chapter 1
awww this is a cute short fic. Hiei and Hotaru are totally meant for each other! 3 3 3
| Cassie M. M 4/25/10 . chapter 1
Aw, that's so kawaii! HotaruxHiei make a cute couple, the way you put them here. I really wish that this wasn't a one-shot, that it was something you were gonna continue as a story, I think that woud make this more epic than it already is. It would be the MEANING of epic! The definition! But, sadly, I don't think you're going to continue it... you DID say this is one-shot. Oh well, this is being added to my favorites.
| Sailor Ra 3/24/05 . chapter 1
When are you going to post up that story? Or one shot? Never mind! I wrote A Hotaru and Hiei one shot (a songfic, but what's the difference?} it's called Lovers and it the last chapter! Just click my name and you'll see it! IF you want to of course!
| Coffeetailor 4/29/04 . chapter 1
This is really sweet so far. I hope you update soon.
| Buffy 4/28/04 . chapter 1
that story is so cute!_
| Jovianokami 4/28/04 . chapter 1
I love a Hiei/Hotaru fic. Please do you think you could do a Kurama/Makoto one? Please?
| Papaya Womaaaan D 4/28/04 . chapter 1
Aw... Hiei helped Hotaru... that's so sweet! *cries hystarically*
Anyway, please continue! Me like this verily!