Like it! Cute and pretty.

Besides the random Japanese in the middle and Hiei's age (he may look young, but he's quite old relatively and if Kurama's in it...)

ANYWAYS, I thought it was adorable. :D

awww this is a cute short fic. Hiei and Hotaru are totally meant for each other! 3 3 3

Aw, that's so kawaii! HotaruxHiei make a cute couple, the way you put them here. I really wish that this wasn't a one-shot, that it was something you were gonna continue as a story, I think that woud make this more epic than it already is. It would be the MEANING of epic! The definition! But, sadly, I don't think you're going to continue it... you DID say this is one-shot. Oh well, this is being added to my favorites.

When are you going to post up that story? Or one shot? Never mind! I wrote A Hotaru and Hiei one shot (a songfic, but what's the difference?} it's called Lovers and it the last chapter! Just click my name and you'll see it! IF you want to of course!

This is really sweet so far. I hope you update soon.

that story is so cute!_

I love a Hiei/Hotaru fic. Please do you think you could do a Kurama/Makoto one? Please?

Aw... Hiei helped Hotaru... that's so sweet! *cries hystarically*
Anyway, please continue! Me like this verily!